Well detailed words to describe your magazine. Along with information of the magazines content, explaining target audience with a fantastic magazine title!
I like the name of your magazine, good style and ideas, will work well as a magazine
very good pitch, spoke confidently and explained all areas of your magazine well.
Although you did not adopt the format of pitch that most of my peers did (video), I feel that the words you have selected give a true and clear representation of what you want your magazine to be like. You delivered the pitch confidently, making sure you communicated all of the necessary information.A job well done Jack!
Good pitch, you delivered it confidently making it come across as very polished and you seem very informed on how to make your magazine look effective. Your style is very appropriate to your target market. Maybe just add colour schemes to fully present your sign ideas and styles.
I liked the way that your pitch differs from other peoples, very original and I think the words that you've chosen give a good idea of what is going to be included in your magazine.
When delivering your pitch you gave very good explanations for the use of these words. I think you give a good representation of how you want your magazine to be, I really like this pitch.
This pitch was really good even though you didn't use a video. You got all your points across and evaluated all of the words which you chose for your pitch.
Very good pitch and well presented. Clearly well thought out!
This pitch was delivered really well and clearly portrayed what your magazine will contain. It was very clear and was different to other pitches given.
Good choice of words, they clearly show how you want your end product to look.